ext_34401 ([identity profile] xinda.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] fickle 2004-10-31 01:23 am (UTC)

wow. I am... wow.... Um... you do realize I don't like this pairing and I enjoyed the fic and enjoyed the imagery in my head? The better thing is usually I replace characters in fics... if I don't like the pairing, I replace things here or there in my head... I didn't even bother. Something about this had it working for me... minus the finger... *cough* I shall never be prepared for such things ^^; But again, I love the last part... I LOVE it.

“Fairy-tales don’t come true. But nightmares do.”

A hard kiss pressed upon bruised skin, “Nightmares live.”

A broken finger twisted sadistically, “Nightmares kill.”

A sudden, harsh bite at a soft shoulder, “Nightmares hate.”

A shockingly-soft whisper, cruel in its deception, “Nightmares love.”

A final, low, victorious laugh.“Nightmares exist. And I am your nightmare.”


Something about the words alone, I'd love to just... have quoted. Seriously. *cough* And, I still love when you write like that - with the actions broken through with words and such.

*loves this* ... *cough* I must not get into the pairing, though, b/c my four charries must stay with each other and no one else... ....

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