They're both really good. I think I prefer this ending, too, although the bit about Tim in Bruce's bed doesn't strike me as quite right for Jason. The Talia mention... oh, JASON HONEY.

FYI, Dick never went by Ravager. Rose offered the name, but he didn't take it.

It is DEFINITELY good enough! *may have to rec, with a warning to Gloss not to read as Rose and Slade terrify her*